Critical Elements Proficient (100%) Needs Improvement (80%) Not Evident (0%) Value
Revisions: Constraints Makes recommendations for
accommodating potential financial,
procedural, and legal constraints
regarding the revised benefits and
compensation package
Makes recommendations for
accommodating potential financial,
procedural, and legal constraints
regarding the revised benefits and
compensation package, but explanation is
cursory or illogical
Does not make recommendations for
accommodating potential financial,
procedural, and legal constraints
regarding the revised benefits and
compensation package
23
Revisions: Current Benefits
and Compensation
Makes revisions to the current benefits
and compensation package that address
concerns related to the previous analysis
of the quantitative and qualitative data
Makes revisions to the current benefits
and compensation package that address
concerns related to the previous analysis
of the quantitative and qualitative data
but revisions are cursory, illogical, or
contain inaccuracies
Does not make revisions to the current
benefits and compensation package that
address concerns related to the previous
analysis of the quantitative and qualitative
data
23
Revisions: Financial Cost Comprehensively explains the financial
cost of proposed changes to both direct
and indirect compensation
Explains the financial cost of proposed
changes to both direct and indirect
compensation, but explanation is cursory,
illogical, or not comprehensive
Does not explain the financial cost of
proposed changes to both direct and
indirect compensation
23
Revisions: Benefit and
Compensation Element
Comprehensively explains the cost of each
benefit and compensation element as a
cost per employee
Explains the cost of each benefit and
compensation element as a cost per
employee, but explanation is cursory,
illogical, or not comprehensive
Does not explain the cost of each benefit
and compensation element as a cost per
employee
23
Articulation of Response Submission has no major errors related to
citations, grammar, spelling, syntax, or
organization
Submission has major errors related to
citations, grammar, spelling, syntax, or
organization that negatively impact
readability and articulation of main ideas
Submission has critical errors related to
citations, grammar, spelling, syntax, or
organization that prevent understanding
of ideas
8
Total 100%
